Laura is one of the best friend's I've ever had. I've known her for six years and I can say I know her pretty well. She's very friendly and ethusiastic. She gets very excited about everything and she's always very happy. She's that kind of person that can cheer you up just looking at her and that's very possitive. She can be a bit freaky but she's very kind and tries to help you if she can. You know you can trust her just looking at her eyes. As I've said, Laura is a really good person and I love her.
Peer response for Elisabet Gracia.
By Laura García.
Dear Eli, you have used a lot of adjectives. It's well seen the personality of that person. Your description is very concrete. It is also well expressed. I can appreciate you describe her with a good point of view. It is notorious you good english use. The topic sentence has been well chosen. I can guess that you are a good reader. You've written a lot of details. The concluding sentence is a good summary of the rest of the redaction. I like how you have done it. Good work!
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